Assignment #4

   My final draft doesn't look too different than my rough draft. I didn't make any major revisions, I just made some minor ones. I fixed my grammar and added a few more sentences to my introduction because I had only wrote two sentences in my rough draft. I noticed that I tend to write incomplete thoughts, reading them out loud sounded so right but in the end it's a sentence fragment. I think peer review had little impact on the revisions I made. After re-reading my paper I found my mistakes and fixed them. The aspect that is strongest in my essay would have to be my background information. The personal experiences, I think really make it a strong essay. A weak aspect would have to be that it probably isn't the required length.