assignment #11

   Looking back at my papers I noticed that one major error is that I don't clarify as much as I should. When giving examples or explaining a specific situation, I think I do a decent job but turns out that I don't clarify what I'm talking about. Another error I noticed is that my papers are very short. Probably because I get straight to the point and I don't go into detail as much I should. These errors make my paper suffer because it makes it seem like it's all over the place. For the future I plan to address these issues by making sure that all my ideas have as much details as possible. I will clarify those ideas as much as I have to. And in turn should fix my paper of being too short.