For my portfolio I chose to revise my argumentation essay. The strengths of my essay were that I had really good ideas and an interesting topic. The weaknesses of the essay were that some of the ideas did not tie in with my thesis and transitioning from paragraph to paragraph was missing.
In order to revise this essay and make it better, I made big changes. For one thing, I am seeing a writing tutor for the first time which is so much helpful. Another way is that I will make my ideas tie in with the thesis. I will make sure that each paragraph flows smoothly and that they relate to my thesis. The last thing I will make is that I will clarify each claim and make sure that anyone can understand.
This essay will be much better organized because I am actually doing an outline. Getting every idea down on paper and organizing them is a time saver.
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